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Classical epic notoriously did not begin at the beginning, go to the end, and then stop. It is not just that the Odyssey and the Aeneid begin partway through the overall arc of what they are telling; shortly after they begin, they allow the hero to narrate the beginning part of the story (in Homer's case, in a sizeable inset with its own inset: Odysseus is nine years into a ten-year story arc at the time; and the actual retelling of the fall of Troy is a further inset narration by an aoidos).

(The Iliad is more linear, if one wants to consider it the story of the wrath of Achilles; if its matter is taken to be that of the Trojan war as a whole, it also begins nearly at the end. But in place of an inset narrative, it merely makes references backwards to a story its audience knew well - much as it throws in foreshadowings of the death and burial of Achilles and the end of the Trojan War despite its formal end with the funeral games for Hector, tamer of horses.)

Linear narrative is almost as old - visible in the Homeric Hymns, for example; and the Greek novel, later on, tends towards linear narration (but with important backstory). The mediaeval romance uses interlaced narratives, but with linear narrative - straight past to future - per strand.

(Linear is probably a misnomer. Most narratives jump, unless they deliberately, obsessively hew to the tightest possible form of the Aristotelian unities; so it's more like a series of shorter and longer dashes. But it's the term I'm going to use for simplicity's sake.)

Pope's narratives are linear, as are Byron's:

Most epic poets plunge "in medias res"
     (Horace makes this the heroic turnpike road),
And then your hero tells, whene'er you please,
     What went before—by way of episode,
While seated after dinner at his ease,
     Beside his mistress in some soft abode,
Palace, or garden, paradise, or cavern,
Which serves the happy couple for a tavern.
 
That is the usual method, but not mine—
 My way is to begin with the beginning;
The regularity of my design
     Forbids all wandering as the worst of sinning...

And many if not most 18th and 19th Century novels are also linear: Fielding, Austen, Eliot, James, though Emily Bronte has a nice example of an inset story beginning towards its end, and Conrad makes good use of nested narratives, though not of beginning in the middle of things.

These days, the odds are good that if you pick up a novel at random - particularly a genre novel at random - it will be a linear plot. Even the massively interlaced narrative in A Song of Ice and Fire moves forward steadily, with only occasional glances backward. Seveneves buries its first two thirds as an epic replayed in the background in the final third, but it reaches that frame only in linear order. (Stephenson does cut back and forth between present and past in Cryptonomicon, though the book does begin at the beginning, if one disregards the preface. The very beginning: "Let's set the existence-of-God issue aside for a later volume, and just stipulate that in some way, self-replicating organisms came into existence on this planet..." The Baroque Cycle shifts between the time of George I and that of Charles II, and its second volume moves in alternating blocks.) And most authors are more conventional than Martin and Stephenson. (Except for Brust. The Vladiad is an impressive tour-de-force in variant narrative structures.) Erikson does begin The Gardens of the Moon in medias res, and the series as a whole moves backwards and forwards in time, to a degree.

I had been thinking about this having just finished Le Carré's Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy. Not only is the bulk of the book told in flashbacks - some Smiley's memories, some people talking to Smiley, some documentary - but on reflection it's clear how dull and disconnected it would be had Le Carré decided to tell the story in a linear manner.

It's not that Le Carré generally avoids linear narrative. The Spy Who Came In From The Cold may return physically to where it began, but chronologically it moves steadily forward.

(Sometimes a story is all flashback. Consider Sunset Boulevard).

What is perhaps worth pointing out is how this sort of narrative reduces, if it does not quite extinguish, a sizeable chunk of the normal tension based on plot. There is always possible tension regarding the ultimate resolution of the story, but the pattern of stopping the narrative to go back reduces the tension during the retelling of the first part of the story - no question of what's going to happen to Palinurus - and halts sny forward motion of the plot for a time.

What it loses in narrative drive it has to make up in other forms of interest. It is worth noting that the one genre to use the form consistently is the mystery novel: although there are many mysteries which provide a slow build to the crime followed by a gradual unravelling, many, especially those with professional or at least frequently consulted detectives begin with the crime - usually a murder - and gradually uncover the backstory as the investigation moves into the future. (Thus clearly is an influence on TTSP, though the proportion of flashback to actual investigation skews away from the detective novel.)

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Back in the High Middle Ages, a literary form developed (well, many literary forms developed, but I'm interested in one): the chivalric romance. Most English-speakers get little contact with the form, unless they're specialists (the main example in English is Sir Gawain and the Green Knight; most of the examples of the form are in French and the final extreme derivatives of it are in Italian -- Boiardo and Ariosto). We do get exposure to them indirectly through Malory -- much of the Morte d'Arthur is translations (somewhat simplified) of French verse romances regarding Arthur. Mediaevalists meet the form in Chaucer (The Knight's Tale being a reasonable example, coming by way of an adaptation from the Italian, and Troilus and Criseyde has some of the marks of one although it has a different formal structure).

The typical form of the verse romance involves knights on quests: I use the plural advisedly, because the general form relies heavily on interlaced adventures, although some examples (like the Gawain poem) do not. In the period, they had a clear social function: to reflect an ideal of chivalric behaviour back towards the nobles who were their audience (many if not most of these poems were the products of aristocratic households). In this they are similar to many of the lyric forms of the same period, which played the game of amour courtois and were frequently not only for but by aristocratic figures. In both cases, the ideals and forms reflected and reinforced a life of leisure (qualified by the fact that the "leisure" involved strenuous military training) and a deliberate separation of social rules from those of other layers of society. (For a discussion of how this reflection worked in actual life, I can direct the reader to Lee Paterson's Chaucer and the Subject of History, which not only analyses examples in Chaucer's work but discusses their reception and the social context.)

(There's a secondary audience which developed later on: a middle-class one which read the stories as pure escapism, the one made fun of in The Knight of the Burning Pestle. But they were not the payors for the original production of the works, and with the decline of the old feudal aristocracy the form basically vanished.)

The chivalric code these works reflected back at the reader (more likely, the auditor, as these would have been read aloud) exalted both prowess and a relatively narrow form of "honour". It did not align in all things with the general mediaeval Catholic Christian ethic (which is why the Grail Quest story in its final form, which has the form of a romance but a content provided by monastic writers, is so aggressively against many of the chivalric patterns, and why Lancelot, the epitome of the chivalric, fails as compared to Bors, Percival, and Galahad). Its audience, however, was happy to take it as normative, and the works can be considered a form of reinforcement of that ideal.

That is not, however, the end of the story.

Consider Raymond Chandler: "But down these mean streets a man must go who is not himself mean, who is neither tarnished nor afraid. The detective in this kind of story must be such a man. He is the hero, he is everything. He must be a complete man and a common man and yet an unusual man. He must be, to use a rather weathered phrase, a man of honor, by instinct, by inevitability, without thought of it, and certainly without saying it. He must be the best man in his world and a good enough man for any world.... The story is his adventure in search of a hidden truth, and it would be no adventure if it did not happen to a man fit for adventure."

The hard-boiled detective novel of the 1930s and 1940s picks up on the overall shape of the chivalric quest, with a twist. The case parallels the knight's quest, and the P.I., like the knight, moves on the edges of society; it is not a coincidence that, just as the knight has to deal with regular challenges from hostile (or even just ambitious) knights which involve significant mayhem, the hard-boiled detetcive is typically beaten up in the course of a case.

Like the knight, the P.I. (as Chandler notes, not a realistic one: "The private detective of fiction is a fantastic creation who acts and speaks like a real man. He can be completely realistic in every sense but one, that one sense being that in life as we know it such a man would not be a private detective.") hews to a code requiring prowess, toughness, a certain amount of care with regards to women (for all of the difference between the ladies amour courtois and the dames of the hard-boiled stories), and a central integrity.

One key element changes in this transposition, though: where the audience of the verse romance wanted to see the knight as someone whom they should emulate, whose code they shared, the audience of the hard-boiled detective story instead relates to them as society does to Jane Jacobs' Guardians: these patrol the outside of our society, not being like us (tougher, stronger, more determined), but (along with the police, with whom they interact) making it possible for society to continue on its way.

If the works have a social function beyond entertainment, then it is not reinforcement (as with the chivalric romance) but rather reassurance: that at least notionally there are guardians out there protecting the circle of society. (Per George Johnston: "Around the battlements go by/Soldier men against the sky,/Violent lovers, husbands, sons,/Guarding my peaceful life with guns.")

There is a further twist to this story.

As it currently stands, the subgenre of urban fantasy has a significant presence of (if not "is dominated by") stories which in their form and protagonists have a direct and unmistakeable descent from the hard-boiled detective story. Sometimes the principal characters are literally PIs (October Daye); sometimes they fill that role within a narrative structure very like that of the PI novel (Harry Dresden, Anita Blake, Matthew Swift, Kate Daniels).

However, these figures do not notionally guard us against dangers which we might take as really out there, the inhabitants of a "realistic" underworld. They guard against dangers which are, by definition, unreal, not just in the sense that they don't exist but in the sense that they cannot. The dangers against which the heroes guard have been displaced into the imaginary, much as the secondary middle class audience for Amadis de Gaula and Sir Isumbras took them as straight tales of marvels rather than as mirrors of behaviour to follow.
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Somewhere back near the beginning of time (it sometimes feels like) I took a graduate seminar on Landscape and Literature, with a focus mainly on the 18th Century (although the 19th and 20th centuries did get a look in). It was not as interesting as it might have been -- the professor, Leo Braudy, was not noted for the excitement he generated -- but it did have its points.

I thought of that course again on re-watching the 2005 movie of Pride and Prejudice (the one with Keira Knightly). I did so because it seemed to me that at many cases where Austen set a scene indoors, the movie gratuitously set it outdoors (sometimes jettisoning a good line in the process: there was no space for Mr. Bennett's "I have two small favours to request. First, that you will allow me the free use of my understanding on the present occasion; and secondly, of my room. I shall be glad to have the library to myself as soon as may be", as Elizabeth had stormed out of the house to a duckpond). Occasionally a scene which Austen set outside (Darcy delivering his letter to Elizabeth, Lady Catherine delivering her interdiction to Elizabeth) was set inside, for no obvious reason I could see. Sometimes the landscape seemed to invade the indoors: the Bennetts' house seemed to have pigs in the background unpredictably.

These weren't the only arbitrary changes which seemed to be aimed principally at foregrounding the picturesque. Why did the Gardiners go to the Peak District rather than having their planned tour to the Lake District cut short[1]? Why was Darcy's set of miniatures by the fireplace (restrained, in good taste) changed into a sculpture gallery? For that matter, how did Darcy know that by wandering out at the crack of dawn he would find Elizabeth outdoors the morning after Lady Catherine had visited? (In the novel he is in London at the time, but I do not begrudge the simplification to the director of his being at Netherfield and coming over; but as a reasonable man he would have ridden over no earlier than mid-morning, on any reasonable expectation of getting access to Elizabeth. Indeed, he shows as much restraint and decorum in the book as one might expect, coming over with Bingley in the afternoon after his arrival back down from London.)

Given the generally positive critical response to the film, It's beside the point to note that I wasn't impressed. What is more interesting is to consider why such an extensive amount of swapping of locales took place, and why it might have an impact on what is designed into the book.

Some changes may have been to speed things up by avoiding a more lengthy setup, or to provide for comic relief by showing people listening at keyholes.[2]

However, there are two things to think about beyond that.

First, Austen's society (as she presents it) has a very organized relationship to the countryside. Most of society's life takes place indoors, but the willingness to explore the countryside, to go in search of the local sublime, had been introduced in the late Eighteenth Century. (It is still notable that Austen's list of the places the Gardiners visit is entirely artificial: " Oxford, Blenheim, Warwick, Kenilworth, Birmingham".)

By modern standards the action of Pride and Prejudice is claustrophobic. The only real stress on the outdoors is the organized park at Rosings, and the better designed one, artifice imitating nature ("in front, a stream of some natural importance was swelled into greater, but without any artificial appearance. Its banks were neither formal nor falsely adorned") at Pemberley. Even there, Elizabeth's thought (omitted, as far as I could tell, in the film) "And of this place, I might have been mistress!" is triggered not by the landscape but by the interior (and the prospect of the landscape from the interior): "it was neither gaudy nor uselessly fine; with less of splendour, and more real elegance, than the furniture of Rosings".

The exception to this are the two walks, set up at the end of the novel, arranged so that Jane and Bingley can converse with some privacy but also with some decorum (i.e. they can be observed at a distance, in principle), which happens to provide the same privacy for Elizabeth and Darcy, much as taking a walk in the garden allows Lady Catherine some privacy with Elizabeth. (The aborted trip to the Lake Country is the other absence here: a trip with the observation of the natural as its end.)

Secondly, Austen's world is not outwardly dramatic: indeed, the urge to be dramatic or to make any sort of scene is anathema to her set of values.[3] Likewise, it's worth noting how many things Elizabeth keeps private, even secret, in the course of the novel. (One of the things the movie gets wrong is the scene with the letter, where Elizabeth lets her aunt and uncle and Darcy all know the contents of the letter; in the novel, she tells Darcy only and precisely because he is there and her uncle is not; it's telling that it is this one slip in her ability to keep a secret which leads to the successful unfolding of the rest of the book -- the first point she actually trusts Darcy. This novel could be subtitled "The Education of Elizabeth Bennett". But I digress.) In this context, the fine details of the interior (to the person) life, observed or taking place in the conventional (physically) interior settings of parlour, library, or dining room, are everything.

Personally, I don't think that the changes are the result of any thematic thought by the filmmaker. I think that he just liked dramatic sets (and his backdrops tend to be cluttered and busy: compare the depiction of the dance where Darcy first appears with that in the BBC series, or the ongoing chaos of the Bennett's residence). If he's going to have a dramatic proposal (he trashes Elizabeth's comprehensive reply to Darcy in favour of more heightened give-and-take), counterpointing it with a dramatic storm and a natural backdrop just allows him to heighten the mood.

[1]So that the film can show a completely unnecessary shot of Elizabeth in a wild location in the Peaks. The film drops out Mrs. Gardiner's background in Derbyshire.

[2]Humphrey: "I should never have thought you would have done anything so undignified as to stoop to keyholes, uncle.

Tyson: "No, no, no. The door will be ajar, my boy."

In the household as shown in the film, any sane person would conduct private conversation only in whispers, and probably in the middle of a field where they could look around for eavesdroppers.

[3]My favourite comment on Elizabeth's manners remains Cabell's: "And when we sanely appraise the most cried-up writer of genteel "realism", matters are not conducted much more candidly. Here is a fair sample : 'From the very beginning of my acquaintance with you, your manners, impressing me with the fullest belief of your arrogance, your conceit, and your selfish disdain of the feelings of others, were such as to form that groundwork of disapprobation on which succeeding events have built so immovable a dislike, and I had not known you a month before I felt that you were the last man in the world whom I could ever be prevailed on to marry.' It is Miss Austen's most famous, most beloved, and most 'natural' character replying not by means of a stilted letter, but colloquially, under the stress of emotion to a proposal of marriage by the man she loves. This is a crisis which in human life a normal young woman simply does not meet with any such rhetorical architecture. . . So there really seems small ground for wonder that Mr. Darcy observed, 'You have said quite enough, madam'; and no cause whatever for surprise that he hastily left the room, and was heard to open the front-door and quit the house. . . Yet, be it forthwith added, Scott and Dickens and Thackeray, and even Miss Austen, were in the right, from one or another aesthetic standpoint, in thus variously editing and revising their contemporaries' unsatisfactory disposition of life.
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Imagine that, sometime before all the media hype and before the creation of the derivative fantasy genre (say in the late 1950s), you sat down to read The Lord of the Rings with no spoilers, and you were a few chapters into it (say, at the end of "A Shortcut to Mushrooms"). Would you have any real idea of what was to come next?

Remember, this is before the crowd of derivative works had created a trope of a quest to bring down a Dark Lord. In fact, the quest as a plot model had fallen into relative disuse (Auden has to dust it off in putting it forward as an explanatory mechanism when writing about LOTR).

What was ahead would have been almost entirely unpredictable. Even after the Council of Elrond, when you encounter elements such as Isildur's heir, or hear of Rohan, Orthanc, and Minas Tirith, and know that the announced thrust of the book will be Frodo carrying the Ring to Mordor, the shape of what is in front would be unguessable. (This is not a plot coupon story; more of that later.)

At the same time, there is nothing arbitrary about the events. Within the scope of the story, there is very little that is pure chance ("...if chance you call it") given the motivations and abilities of the characters. Bilbo's picking up the Ring is chance (or divine intervention) in the plot inside the Hobbit, as Gandalf recognizes, but it's already established background for the whole of LOTR. (There's an excellent case to be made that the timing of Merry and Pippin coming to Fangorn is as well, (and that of Frodo and Sam meeting up with Faramir) but in both cases what all the characters are doing is non-arbitrary in terms of their own world-lines.) Although LOTR (like most realistic novels) incorporates some coincidence, it is not a coincidence-driven plot any more than it is a predictable one.

Or consider Anathem. For much of the book, as with LOTR, it is a narrative of discovery for the reader (and for the narrator). And again, what is discovered is not arbitrary, but integral to the world and the people depicted.

This is not confined to SF/Fantasy, where the broad genre expectations are for wonders and the unexpected. Take a look at Gaudy Night, a number of chapters in. We know it's a detective novel, so we have basic expectations of a problem to be solved (successfully -- this is not a subversion like Trent's Last Case), and a perpetrator to be unmasked. But the shape of the plot developments is not predictable for the reader, regardless of the fact that the action of the novel grows integrally out of the characters' motivations. (As far as chance goes, I would have to count only the collision with Lord Saint-George -- and that's a minor coincidence, in a small city like the centre of Oxford.)

Just to extend the genres represented, I'll hold up The Grand Sophy. Again, the genre gives us some very broad expectations (Sophy and Charles will make a couple by the end of the book). But the plot is a set of broadly unexpected twists, and the sequence of events grows organically out of the characters' motivations.

I'm going to make a carefully hedged claim here: in general, barring special cases, most of what we are likely to think of as the best books have both there traits: the plots are at best only very generally predictable, and the events which make them up are neither coincidental nor arbitrary once one accepts the set-up of the book.

Now consider, in contrast, two other sets of novels.

First: Flag in Exile, Murder on the Orient Express, 1636: The Kremlin Games, and A Lady of Quality.

In each of these books, a diligent reader can guess at a good deal of the detailed shape of the book after a few chapters (e.g. Honor will not only come back into action as an Admiral at Grayson, but will have to deal with both a Havenite attack and internal opposition from Grayson conservatives, both of which she will carry off beyond any reasonable expectation; Poirot will examine each potential suspect / witness and gradually put together his theory, keeping it from everyone until a final recognition scene[1]). In the Flint novel, there's a general shape of plot that has become a standard form in the 1632 novels (uptimer is the central figure in a process of changing / revolutionizing another culture which involves conflict with both conservative downtimers and frequently political or personal conflict with other uptimers; if you know anything about Muscovy in the period (say, from reading The Ringed Castle), you can guess a lot more). In the Heyer case, the general nature of the novels' conflicts, both intra-familial and extra-familial, are very similar to those in many of her previous works.

These novels "work", and are in fact all very popular. But the reading experience is conditioned not by a sense of meeting the unexpected, but by navigating a broadly expected course.

This is not simply a contrast of good versus poor craft. (This is one reason I hedged above.) Weber, for example, typically builds his plots by telegraphing broadly what is going to happen long before he actually shows it; this is a deliberate choice of a type of plot construction which is not uncommon in the thriller or military novel: consider Tom Clancy. The reader is in a privileged position of knowing broadly what is going to happen and the pleasure is gained from seeing just how it plays out, or how apparently unbeatable odds are met by the protagonist. (My personal judgement tells me that this is a good way of making good light reads but rarely for even approaching the very good let alone great: one advantage of first-person narrative or tight third person is that it makes this sort of plot far more difficult to write.) And there are great works, usually in a tragic vein, which gain most of their impact from the audience knowing ahead of time what is to happen and seeing the inevitable play out. (The Oedipus Tyrannos is the classic (in both senses) example; Paradise Lost, which announces its plot in the first verse paragraph, is another.

The plot coupon novel is a special case of the predictable plot. The hero (this is frequently a "quest" or heroic fantasy) is told of a set of tasks which have to be accomplished, leading up to a final objective, at the outset of the novel, and he (usually he) or his companions set about collecting the coupons. Sometimes even the order is decreed in advance. Eddings' series are built this way; so are Riordan's. (Internally, these are justified by "prophecy". but it always strikes me as lazy plot-building.) One trait which makes this a particularly weak plot type is that these coupons are typically arbitrary, independent of one another, and the novel becomes a series of disconnected episodes rather than an organic whole. It's popular in YA fantasy, though, possibly because it provides a simple structure for the reader to measure the progress through the novel by.

Consider, in contrast, another set of novels: The Three Hostages, The Shambling Guide to New York City, and Diplomatic Immunity. These are not entirely predictable novels, but they are driven by entirely too much coincidence. DI not only begins with the coincidence of Miles contact with Bel, but by the fact that he's basically the only person in the galaxy who has the contacts and the knowledge to deal with a situation he's assigned to simply because he's nearby to it. (I mean, would anyone else within several parsecs even have recognized the sigil for the Star Creche?) Lafferty's novel -- which got her plenty of attention, and a nomination for the Campbell award -- hinges on a whole set of coincidences, the biggest being that the conflict which drove the heroine to New York in the first place, and which has no logical connection to the world she has fallen into, turns out to involve a major villain within that world. Buchan's (deservedly classic) thriller is largely worked out organically, but begins with just too may coincidences to be true. Hannay just happens to be able to make contact with Medina just at the same time as he has been handed the kidnapping to solve (and have Medina decide that he would be a useful tool), just happens to be a poor hypnotic subject, and just happens to be a good friend of Sandy, who is Medina's ideal antagonist. (Buchan plays games with the plot coupon theme by deliberately having a character talk about the technique of linking three arbitrary topics together, choosing three images which turn out to be critical to the whole plot.)

Coincidence is one aspect of the more general case of the arbitrarily driven plot. In a plot driven by coincidence, the arbitrariness accompanies things which are intrinsically improbably and advance a plotline; more generally, episodes which are introduced with no organic connection to the central drivers of the plot may not be "coincidence" -- they advance no plot, they're there just for themselves -- but they are surely random.

Again, this can be used in great works as well as mediocre ones. In tragedy, coincidences which keep shutting down options for the protagonist create a sense of struggling vainly against fate (consider Romeo and Juliet). In comedy, coincidence becomes a technique of its own, precisely because expectations in comedy are explicitly removed from those in reality. (And frequently the point of a coincidental episode in a comedy is not to advance a plot arc but to provide an incongruous episode which is humorous for its own sake: consider the scene in Crispin's Holy Disorders with the pet raven.) Once it becomes a structure in itself, coincidence can work very well: the picaresque novel is basically a set of random encounters strung along the thread of the central character's experience; so is Christian's pilgrimage in Bunyan, or Quixote's journey in Cervantes. (A fully coincidence-driven plot moves away, again, from the predictable, frequently in the direction of the absurd.)

So where am I going here?

I realized, as I was looking back on last year's reading, that the books which I rated most highly were those which had an organic development of a set of initial conditions (minimal coincidence -- not necessarily none -- you can get away with one or so simply because that's sometimes just how life is and it can, used carefully, increase rather than weaken verisimilitude) combined with an essential unpredictability in the reading experience: Hild, City of Stairs, Ancillary Sword, The March North, Three Parts Dead.

Neither of these structural principles is exactly unobvious, but it can be interesting to sort one's favourite (or not-so-favourite) books into heaps based on these criteria. Sometimes books by the same author fall into different heaps: Bujold loves coincidence-driven plots, but Memory is far less coincidence-driven than her other books; Heyer is all over the map; Pride and Prejudice is much less coincidence-driven than Persuasion, and Mansfield Park even less so (but MP telegraphs its plot more than do the others).

[1]The contrast with Gaudy Night is not in recognizing that the solution will be reached and the reasoning revealed, as this is a demand of the genre itself; it's that the nature of the plot advancement is generally foreseeable in Christie's case (because of her previous use in other novels) whereas this is not the case with GN by reference to prior works of Sayers, or anyone else.
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The original formulation of "willing suspension of disbelief" was by Coleridge, talking about writing poems regarding the supernatural. It was picked up (to my recollection) by Lin Carter in the early 1970's to talk about fantasy and has become generalized within the SFF community.

Historical novels have their own variant of WSOD as well, though, one identified by Chesterton in the Father Brown stories:

"I can believe the impossible, but not the improbable. ... It really is more natural to believe a preternatural story, that deals with things we don't understand, than a natural story that contradicts things we do understand. Tell me that the great Mr. Gladstone, in his last hours, was haunted by the ghost of Parnell, and I will be agnostic about it. But tell me that Mr. Gladstone, when first presented to Queen Victoria, wore his hat in her drawing-room and slapped her on the back and offered her a cigar, and I am not agnostic at all. That is not impossible; it's only incredible. But I'm much more certain it didn't happen than that Parnell's ghost didn't appear; because it violates the laws of the world I do understand."


I was reading Peter Brown's biography of Augustine and was reminded of a prime example from a number of years ago.

I was reading Jack Whyte's series of books regarding Merlin/Arthur (from the library, so no money was wasted) and found that he was presenting an opposition between a fluffy, tolerant native Christianity to Great Britain (represented by Pelagius) and a rigid, intolerant Christianity associated with Roman Christianity (presumably represented by Augustinians). "That day I read no more."

It was obvious why he was doing this: he wanted to present a completely ahistorical religion for his protagonists which would make them more attractive / make them more like his 20th Century audience. It was also obvious that he didn't understand a thing he was talking about.

First, the Pelagians were more rigorist than the Augustinians. Sure, they defended natural human virtue, but they did so to insist that the only virtue worth praising was a complete ascetic rigorist monastic ideal -- that God had given everyone the capability to be saintly and that it was their own fault if they didn't make use of it. (By contrast, Augustine's views were driven explicitly to make a place for the homme moyen sensuel, the common people of his day; and his views regarding the physical creation were far more positive than those of the Pelagians -- he had grappled with this when he had rejected Manichaeanism.)

Secondly, everything we know about the Celtic Church at any period suggests that it was very rigorist.

Thirdly, by modern standards, everyone was rigorist, and nobody had views which would be sympathetic to everyday modern people. There was a brief period when there were relatively "flexible" Christians after the conversion of the Empire, and historians have come more and more to see these people as a legitimate version of Christianity rather than half-converted pagans: Lactantius would be an example. However, these people were not flexible in that they were like a secular reader of today, or even a mainline protestant; they were flexible in that they were willing to accept both the cultural practices which had come down through paganism (but were not explicitly idolatrous) such as the Lupercalia and the revelation of Christianity. (Their ethical views tended to be on the strict side, as they merged the ethics of Stoicism / Neoplatonism with that of Christianity.) In many ways they were less like us than an Augustinian thinker: we owe a great deal to the relative subtlety of Augustine's thought (as displayed, for example, in the Confessions which was alien to these people.

So, no, just not possible. It made his entire story completely unbelievable, as he was supplying motivations and alliances which were just flat-out impossible. It also showed that, no matter how much formal research Whyte had done, he just didn't grasp the world he was depicting, or trying to depict.

Hild

Nov. 13th, 2014 08:10 am
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Nicola Griffith's Hild is a very well-done historical novel, in the sense that it deals fairly well with the historical novelist's dilemma and does not just give us modern people in a mediaeval dress. (Many if not most historical novels do.) It is also a well-written novel, with well-rounded characters, good prose, and a measured pace. I look forward to its successor.

That being said, I'm going to go on a tangent about historicity.

First, we know less about pagan East Anglia in the Seventh Century than we do about Republican Rome, especially if we want to talk about the details of everyday life. (We know the names of kings and battles, and some bits from Bede, essentially.) Every single source we have is written a generation and a half, at best, after the fact, in a Christian society. The texts we have which preserve elements of the earlier society have their own limitations -- embedded heroic stories, the "ruins" of Tolkien's allegory about the writing of Beowulf, do not have much connection with everyday life, even among the nobility. James the Deacon, a character in the novel, lived to be an old man and may have provided information regarding the Synod of Whitby which we have in Bede (which took place, be it noted, well after this first book in the projected trilogy), but even if he or any of his contemporaries told a very young Bede, or a source of Bede's, stories about the early days in the north, and what the fabric of life was like, they have not come down to us. The Chronicle has battles, royal births, and deaths, but it itself was composed rather after the fact and is in no way a primary document. We know virtually nothing about the Anglian (or indeed, general Germanic) practice of the old religion.

Writers didn't suppress details of the old society; they just weren't interested in it, for the parts that had gone away, or took for granted the continuing elements. Much of what we know about social history of the period is actually fairly recent, based on archaeology rather than history.

Griffith takes as much care as she can to get her material and social context right, but she still has a large blank space to fill in, even with all the constraints she conforms to.

Second, Griffith herself has been clear about having "taken heinous liberties with" Paulinus of York. Nothing that she's done with him has been impossible, but the probability of his having been like the man depicted in the novel is low.

Third, Much of the thread of the novel does turn around one entirely made-up character (Cian).

Fourth, the pattern of other royal abbesses of joint monasteries -- Æthelthryth / Audrey of Ely is a later contemporary of Hild's, also East Anglian, about whom we know more of her life before becoming an abbess -- suggests that one need not invoke the exceptional course of being a seer to explain a level of female agency in that society required to become a major figure of this type. Hild is not a one-of-a-kind figure. Occam's Razor leads me to posit, in reality, a rather different life arc for the early Hild.

Fifth, I doubt that the East Angles were as illiterate as depicted; futharc is older than the invasion of England in the Germanic world, was certainly preserved down to the time of (at least) the Ruthwell Cross, and would have been part of the imported culture of the Angles.

The language isn't quite right -- Griffith uses standard West Saxon forms of the Eighth/Ninth Century, as far as I can tell, and not the Northumbrian of Caedmon or Bede. Also, using "York" for the city that was the Roman Eboracum will not fit until after the Vikings name it Jorvik: it is Eoforwic during the period. Similarly, Hild would not have referred to Mercia as "Mercia", which was a Latin form used in the written texts of later Anglo-Saxon England; it would be like us referring to "Anglia" or "Francia"; nor, being Northumbrian, would she have called it "Mearc". She would have said "Marc".

Now, none of this matters all that much. Francis Lymond's world bends somewhat around him as well, to accommodate his story, as does Harry Flashman's. Griffith puts together a coherent world which does not directly contradict what we know. The internal dynamics of that world produce the recorded historical events we have without special assistance from the author. As long as you don't confuse it with the actual past, you're fine.

You could probably write an historical novel about a "most probable" Hild, but (1) it would probably be rather dull and (2) it would also probably be wrong about all sorts of stuff.

But it's worth remembering that for any imaginative recreation of a period in history, it will be shaped by the contemporary concerns of the writer, which will be as transparent to the writer's audience as they are to the writer. Then at some time, thirty, fifty, eighty years later the marks of "period" will become not only visible but inescapable.
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There are, I think, three archetypal relations of consumers of literary works to the works in question.

The oldest is literally that of an audience reacting to a performance.  That was the context for Homer; it remains (obviously) the context for drama.  It can be argued that this was the principal model, even if at one remove, until about 1500: a work circulating in manuscript was a stand-in for a (perhaps notional) performance by the author. The reader is facing the author and reacting to all the elements of the performance.

(There was a secondary model, that of the researcher consulting a work of reference: the type of engagement contemplated is different for Augustine's Confessions[1] and for De Trinitate.  Many works were written with that model in mind -- from Herodotus to Isidore of Seville -- even in the days of antiquity.  In this context the "literary" character of the work is secondary.)

The second is the "appreciator": originally, literally, a correspondent or friend of the author to whom a lyric or short work of a "private" nature might be forwarded.  (Sometimes the work was written expressly for the recipient.) This is the model of the non-sung lyric; occasionally it has been the original model for much larger works (the ones where there is no original intent to publish until friends either urge the publication of the work or actually forward it to a publisher).[2]  The way of reading associated with this mode is typically one of technical appreciation; the reader is "looking over the shoulder" of the author.

The third may have earlier roots but did not become a normative form until the emergence of the middle class: it is the reader who is part of a mass audience who sits privately and (silently) reads the work in question.  This is the typical form of engagement with the novel.

None of these assumes an identification with the protagonist.  In the first and second cases, it is the artist, not the internal character, who is front and centre. (For the Odyssey or the Aeneid or many mediaeval romances, the main character is definitely foregrounded throughout, but the narratorial techniques foreground the artifice of the narrative even above the character.)

The early novel also avoids identification with a central character.  To begin with, many have a narratorial voice who is distinct from and critical of the narrator (consider Tom Jones, or anything by Jane Austen).  Others (Tristram Shandy, anyone?) have such a quirky first-person narrator that identification is not one of the demands of the text on the reader.  This continues through the Nineteenth Century and into the Twentieth in the main stream of the novel: consider George Eliot, Henry James, and James Joyce. (The omniscient narratorial voice sinks back into the background as we move into the Twentieth, though, becoming more and more "neutral" and apparently transparent: Conrad is succeeded by Hemingway on one side, and "train of consciousness" techniques (notably in Woolf, more than Joyce) foreground characters but in a context where the reader has to be active to separate reality from impression on the other).

However, the model of private engagement allows identification with the narrator, or the central viewpoint character.  One is no longer looking over the author's shoulder, or engaging with the author as performer; the artist vanishes.  In Joyce's expression, "The artist, like the God of the creation, remains within or behind or beyond or above his handiwork, invisible, refined out of existence, indifferent, paring his fingernails."  (Joyce was not contemplating identification of the reader with elements within the work, but rather something more like the deist finding a watch on the beach; but it is nevertheless true that one possible response is to assimilate the experience of the artifact to that of real life.) Note, however, that isn't Joyce himself speaking, but Stephen Daedalus (who is a very unreliable narrator), and Joyce's own practice does not show a consistent aim of making the artist invisible...

Thus there is also a development of novels which work by encouraging an identity between the reader and the main character -- most obviously where the narrative is first person (Jane Eyre and its successors) but also in third-person narratives which follow a central character whose viewpoint is presented as normative.  Many genre novels adopt this model -- they centre on the hero, or his slight variant, the detective, in a story about his / her (usually his, except in genre romances) establishing order / eliminating disorder / defeating evil / solving crimes.

The types were pretty distinct, though.  You couldn't easily mistake a mainstream novel for a genre one in, say, the mid-thirties: a couple of chapters would orient the reader pretty quickly as regards which conventions were being followed.

However, one thing that has happened in the late Twentieth Century is that there has been a convergence centred around the technique of the (subtly) unreliable narrator.  On the mainstream side, the dividends of experimental techniques diminished as those techniques either became domesticated (were not experimental any longer: many stream-of-consciousness techniques have just become part of the standard novelistic toolkit) or became evidently so risky that they worked rather than flopped only in the hands of exceptionally skilled authors (see: House of Leaves, and compare Illuminatus!).  By the late Twentieth Century both genre and non-genre novels were making heavy use of a mix of weak train-of-consciousness together with a form of style indirect libre / "tight third person" as a standard narratorial model, and were doing so to present their stories via an unreliable narrator / point of view.  There are lots of outliers in both directions -- nostalgic whodunnits and space operas on one side and Pynchon / Stephenson / Danielewski (plus many others) on the other -- but a random selection of well-regarded recent novels of any sort will probably be largely made up of this one type. John M. Ford is the poster child for this in SFF, but even such popular and more accessible writers as Lois Bujold and Charlie Stross are explicit about their use of unreliable narratorial perspectives.

In addition, the whole approach of identifying with the viewpoint character has been at odds with critical reading pretty well forever.  (Bradleian criticism at the beginning of the Twentieth Century would be the exception here -- the approach parodied as "How many children had Lady Macbeth?".) For an extended period in the Twentieth Century, the critical reader was encouraged to approach a work of literature as an artifact, independent of the author: characters in a novel, principal or otherwise, were evaluated at a remove as elements in the structure of the novel.  Modern post-Structuralist approaches (notably New Historicism and Deconstruction) have jettisoned the idea that the work should be read on its own -- frequently one is reading _through_ the artifact to engage broader issues -- but it is, if anything, even more the case that characters within the work are not treated as autonomous beings with whom one might identify or treat as other humans with whom one might engage.

Genre readers, however, are in different stages of catching up.  When I look over book reviews, I frequently see it mentioned as a problem that the reviewer could not identify with the central character, or found the central character's views or perceptions objectionable (where those views or perceptions are demonstrably not being presented as objectively true by the author).  Or, more insidiously, I see readers who take the narrator's viewpoint at face value because they are reading with identification rather than critical distance.

[1]OK, the Confessions is technically an overheard extended prayer, and the reader is in the technical role of an allowed eavesdropper.  This does have its successors -- Gower's Confessio Amantis comes to mind -- but the effect is different when the speaker is fictional rather than the subject/object of an autobiography.  In some ways, the Confessions is one of the earliest works presupposing a private consumer who is not an "appreciator".

[2] The Hobbit is an interesting recent example of both prior types: it was originally a "performed" work, written for reading to the author's children.  It was circulated to a few friends, one of whom brought it to the attention of George Allen and Unwin.
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There's an article over at tor.com regarding moral ambiguity in Percy Jackson and the Olympians, which is mildly interesting -- even though my reaction is "not so much".

My daughter is currently reading the series, so the books are on hand and I read them through, not being averse to a quick light read, and I did enjoy them.  But as far as moral ambiguity went, my initial reaction was that it was unnecessarily skipping some.

My main concern was around Chronos, who is presented as an entirely bad figure (indeed, all of the Titans are presented as black, even those who tend to show sympathetically in actual myth, like Prometheus and Epimetheus). This is (it turns out in the second series) equally applicable to Chronos' "Roman" version of Saturn.  However, there's a long tradition that Saturn's reign was a golden age:  iam redit et Virgo, redeunt Saturnia regna, as the Fourth Eclogue has it.  A month or so ago I was at Stirling Castle, where James V had included a statue of Saturn as part of a representation of his own reign as a new golden age.  (This confused my daughter no end, given her exposure to Riordan). The gods may have had difficulties with Saturn, but humanity seems to have had a better time (although one without fire: if you put everything together, it's one of those semi-Edenic worlds without the need for agricultural labour but also without any of the benefits of civilization.

I don't think that painting Chronos black was needed, even at a middle-school level.  Some shades of grey could have been provided: showing the Titans, for example, as representing a time that was so irretrievably past that their return would be massively destructive, but not simply nasty in themselves.

I will say, though, that the movies make the books look positively sophisticated and subtle, both in their characterizations and in the amount of hacking they did to the plots.  On the topic of absent parents (the focus of the article linked above), for example, the movie inserts a iron-clad rule preventing the gods from having contact with their children (thereby rather improving the optics of both Hermes and Poseidon). Characterization also suffered badly.  Very badly.
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For all those disliking the Redshirts Hugo win: have you really looked at the competition?  Although there have been nominations for both of its predecessors, Blackout represents a subgenre which only some fans read at all; Captain Vorpatril's Alliance is a weak representative of stronger predecessors; the Robinson seems to be deeply polarizing -- people either love it or loathe it -- and Throne of the Crescent Moon, while promising, has an episodic structure that started to bog down about halfway through (also, being fantasy already gives it a bit of a handicap[1]).  It's a weak year, but consider that the nomination runner-up was Monster Hunter Legion. (The novels which people were suggesting earlier on, when nominations came out, as competition were rather further down the nominations list, now that we can see it: The Killing Moon was #7, Glamor in Glass #10, The Drowning Girl #11, The Hydrogen Sonata #12, and Railsea #13.)

[1]The Hugos are perceived to have a mild bias against fantasy (translation: there are lots of fantasies which earn the Hugo, but they frequently lose to somewhat less impressive "pure SF" (not necessarily hard, but untouched by any grey area fantasy cooties) in a run-off).  Significant or very well-regarded fantasy works which have lost to SF novels include: Throne of the Crescent Moon, The Hundred Thousand Kingdoms, Palimpsest, and City on Fire. (Perdido Street Station also lost, but to a fantasy novel.)  However, 7 of the 15 winners since 2000 were fantasy novels, so the bias is not extreme.

Redshirts' main "problem" is that it's light.  Like everything else by Scalzi, it's competently done, accurately aimed at its market (and thus popular), and clever.  But it's light.

However, that raises an interesting observation about expectations and the current incentives which affect the structure and quality of many current genre novels.

It's accepted knowledge that the long, frequently rambling structure of the mid-Victorian novel is in part due to the incentives that serialization presented.  If you were a professional novelist (Dickens, Thackeray, Collins) or semi-professional (Trollope, who was a part-time author until partway through his career) it made the most financial sense to have an episodic, fairly straightforward structure and a relatively wordy style.  And sure enough, many novels from the period are serial, wordy novels.

Modern genre writing has a different set of incentives.  There are a few prominent writers who treat writing as a side activity, but many genre writers are full-time authors who depend on a system of advances in a publishing cycle where keeping your name in front of the public, and receiving regular income from advances, requires a book a year or so. (Authors who hit full-scale best-sellerdom are less tied to this, because the scale of their earnings allows them to take longer between books.) There are exceptions: Vernor Vinge, for example, retired as an academic only in 2000 to focus on writing, after A Deepness in the Sky (published seven years after its predecessor) was published; Adam Roberts is a full-time academic as well as an SF novelist. However, it's more typical to write full-time among the dominant author set: Seanan McGuire, John Scalzi, Charles Stross, Elizabeth Bear, Lois McMaster Bujold, George R.R. Martin (who is now successful enough to be able to take his time), Neil Gaiman, Neal Stephenson (also in the successful enough to modify the incentives category), Steven Erikson, Catherynne M. Valente, Peter Watts. (So-called "literary" authors have a different set of incentives, since more of their income is likely to come from a combination of grants and academic or semi-academic positions.)

In addition, the SF genre audience (at least) is relatively averse to "literary" characteristics: although some readers like the density of Pynchon or Stephenson, many don't, and the majority of the market for the bulk of SF/Fantasy have tastes such that putting in effort to push quality from "good enough" up to "excellent" is unlikely to increase sales significantly.

The incentive for most authors is thus to produce one or two works a year which are workmanlike but not "artistic".  Length will be limited, unless the work can be converted into a series (in which case an extended story arc becomes a little like a 19th-century serialization in larger chunks).

There are some obvious exceptions to this.  First novels will typically be the product of several years' work; novels by authors with either independent means or day jobs may take longer to come out and be more heavily reworked/rewritten than novels by professional authors. Thus Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norrell took ten years to write, for example.

If we look back at the 20th century, though, and think of the books which stand out as high points... well, at one extreme, The Lord of the Rings took about 20 years between being begun and being published, with multiple rewritings along the way. Ulysses and Gravity's Rainbow also took years to write; A Dance To The Music Of Time took over 20 years to write, with 2-3 years between individual volumes. On the other hand, Brideshead Revisited took only months to write. Cherryh wrote Cyteen after becoming a full-time author and as part of an ongoing regular flow of novels,and LeGuin's major works were published within a relatively tight timeframe, which overlapped with the years when she was bringing up a family, and she has referred to the time as two people (herself and her husband) doing three full-time jobs.  By the time Doomsday Book was published, Connie Willis had been a full-time writer for some years and it was produced as part of a regular publication schedule.

So this doesn't mean that we're doomed to a flow of substandard novels -- not at all.  First, the vast majority of novels written and published under the current system are good: well-crafted, well-plotted, enjoyable, frequently clever. Secondly, authors do have a secondary incentive to try to break into the top rank if they can, and one way to do so is to write more ambitious works. (The other obvious way being to be very good at meeting the demands of a large market segment.)  Thirdly, there's little evidence that the structure provides disincentives for the Tolkiens of the world: what it does do is enable good authors to produce more merely good works than they would have been able to in the past. Finally, the record indicates that there are plenty of lasting, important, really well-written works which have been written and published within a relatively short timeframe.

However, it also means that on average, the best works of a normal year will tend to fall into that professional-author-at-a-good-enough-level category.  And Redshirts is a good example of that category, just as 2312, Captain Vorpatril's Alliance, and Blackout are. (Ahmed's book is that other exception, the first novel, and he falls into the more "literary" category of the quasi-academic author as his other work.)
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... except, of course, it's not.  They've chosen one novel per author.  In reality, it would be bizarre to expect that the very best novelists wrote only one of the top 100 novels.  (Also, their choices sometimes seem to me to be questionable).

I also question the usefulness of selecting novels from, oh, the last 50 years: we're too close.  Too much of our reaction may be to shared memes which don't affect our reaction to novels from 200 years ago. (As the novels are arranged roughly chronologically, this translates as "anything after Catch-22" (which was published in 1961). I'm also dubious about about a quarter of the list falling into this recent category on more general grounds: there's a distortion of perspective distinct from our assessment of quality which tends to make recent names more familiar. (You'll note that I haven't read many of the recent selections, as my tastes diverge from "mainstream" literature in the period, and the major authors I have read, like Pynchon, don't seem to get a look in.)

I've bolded all the books I own, italicized all those I've read but don't own, and added comments as seemed appropriate.
Cut for length... )

Authors who probably should be on the list but aren't: Walpole, Zola, Smollett, Chesterton, Scott, Hugo, maybe Burney, Powell, (Dance to the Music of Time was started before my 50-year cut-off).
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I recently finished the Mass Market Paperback of David Weber's War Maid's Choice.

Inside that novel there is a good slim novel trying to get out.  If you're good at skimming and are familiar with how Weber writes you can actually get close to reading it.

Like much of his recent output, WMC is afflicted by bloat.  This is due to a confluence of several factors:

1) He composes by dictation.  There's nothing intrinsically wrong with this -- so did Winston Churchill -- and Weber has good reason to do so: he had an accident in the 1990s which pretty well destroyed a wrist.  However, composing orally tends towards wordiness, and the sort of fine editing needed to compensate for it is extensive (read: print out everything, mark it up by hand, do extensive input in the editing stage.  I used to be an editor).

I think that this is the primary cause -- you can plot the real beginning of the bloat at the time of the accident.

2) He has a tendency towards story structure which can bloat very easily (and he's had it since well before bloat became a problem): instead of having a tight focus on one character and narrowing down the reader's experience to that input, he jumps around between all "sides" of a conflict and among multiple characters.  He also has a somewhat diffuse style of depicting an individual's train of thought or internal dialogue.

3) He likes to provide infodumps (and many of his dedicated readers like the infodumps).  This is most notoriously true of his space battles, but it pops up everywhere.

4) Finally, he's reached the stage, not so much of being too big to edit, but of being popular enough that there's little financial incentive to edit.  The following books all postdate the tendency to bloat and all have been on the NYT extended bestseller list:

Ashes of Victory
War of Honor
At All Costs
The Shadow of Saganami
Wind Rider's Oath


(There may be more, but there seems to be no single place giving me a list of all of Weber's books which have made the list). Given this fact, the incentive, for his publishing houses (Baen and Tor: the Safehold series tends just as much towards bloat as anything else) as much as for Weber himself, would be purely one of artistic quality, and Weber writes (I think consciously) as an entertainer.
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I just finished Mary Robinette Kowal's Shades of Milk and Honey, and it made me think about some of the issues surrounding Jane Austen tributes / pastiches / homages.  There have been a number of these over the years (among which are the execrable Pemberley and P. D. James' Death Comes to Pemberley), and none of them really manages to get very close to the real experience.[1]

I'm prepared to argue that the barriers, taken together, make it almost impossible to do this with full success, short of a Pierre Menard approach.

At the simplest mechanical level, there's the problem of getting the language right.  Words change, vocabularies change, and using only George III/Regency language and using it in the right way requires a great deal of knowledge and care.  (I won't say that it's impossible -- teachers who specialize in the period might have a chance at it -- but it's very difficult.)  In addition, there's the additional constraint that you should exclude period language of a level that Austen herself excluded.  I'm pretty sure, for example, that she never once refers to the ton, beloved of Georgette Heyer. (There's a reason for this: Austen didn't care about the ton, and to the degree that she did, she distrusted them.)

At the next level, there's getting the referents right. An abbey did not usually mean a Gothic building; it would have been far more likely to be a Palladian or Georgian residence of some scale on land acquired from the Crown which had belonged to an Abbey in Henry VIII's day. (It was occasionally used loosely to refer to such a residence even if the land did not go back to an actual abbey).  Being aware of the material culture of the time is tricky (condition of roads, details of clothing and the constraints they imposed, etc.).

Austen's style is not as easy as it seems to imitate (of which more anon: it has to do with her aims and intent as much as idiosyncrasies).

In choosing Dramatis Personae, one has to be careful yet again: the figure of highest rank in all of her novels is a Baronet, and her main figures are almost all gentry ("almost" because there are a few servants and people in trade -- and note that the line isn't easy to draw -- Austen was generally suspicious of cits, but she also gives us the Gardiners).  So playing with nobility immediately marks one's work as un-Austenish.

Except when parodying it, she avoids melodrama.  Nobody ever runs away to Gretna Green in an Austen novel; not even Lydia Bennett.  There are no duels, despite Mrs. Bennett's fears about Mr. Bennett. Nobody dies on-screen, as it were.  The single most violent thing that happens to anyone is a young woman slipping on a step and hitting her head.

She excludes current affairs; except for a few references to naval action in Persuasion and the presence of soldiers in Pride and Prejudice, it would be hard to find any indication at all of the Napoleonic wars.

However, the biggest barrier has to do with the nature of the project itself.

Jane Austen is, in attitude, probably closest to Dr. Johnson of all the English authors.  She's a dyed-in-the-wool Tory, deeply suspicious of anything urban or modern; she's the daughter of a C. of E. Rector with that Augustan view which reduces religion to morality but still values it heavily.  (There's no piety surrounding religion in Austen, but the church is assumed to be appropriately there as an institution.)

She is writing works which engage the present -- her present -- critically but subtly from a deeply moral (and conservative) point of view.  She is deeply concerned with issues surrounding the status and power of women, but she advocates no radical changes: in her view if everyone within the system did as they ought, the system would work; but she sees all sorts of people not doing so.

In a way somewhat analogous to the way in which Stanley Fish's Milton writes in such a way as to engage the reader actively in Paradise Lost, Austen's prose is a steady flow of invitations to the reader to make (or at least recognize) small moral judgements.  Her comedy of manners is about figures who are all somewhat flawed (although most of them are basically "good") -- including her heroines.  In particular, she achieves something of the effect Pope does in balancing couplets by pairing precisely chosen verbs or adjectives with slightly different meanings to evoke their fine distinctions.   (For a Popeian example of this sort of parallelism, consider the verbs in "true genius kindles, and fair fame inspires" -- genius is "kindled" because it is ultimately a flame and fame (= rumour) is inspired because both have to do with breath; genius can be true, but fame is only "fair" (attractive, but not necessarily true).)



The farewell between herself and Mr. Wickham was perfectly friendly; on his side even more. His present pursuit could not make him forget that Elizabeth had been the first to excite and to deserve his attention, the first to listen and to pity, the first to be admired; and in his manner of bidding her adieu, wishing her every enjoyment, reminding her of what she was to expect in Lady Catherine de Bourgh, and trusting their opinion of her—their opinion of everybody—would always coincide, there was a solicitude, an interest which she felt must ever attach her to him with a most sincere regard; and she parted from him convinced that, whether married or single, he must always be her model of the amiable and pleasing.


Note that the virtues assigned to Wickham are both among the most shallow ones possible("There certainly was some great mismanagement in the education of those two young men. One has got all the goodness, and the other all the appearance of it."); that if Elizabeth deserved his regard then his "present pursuit" (which itself has a hunting tone around it, making Miss King his prey) is a decline; that Elizabeth's responses (listen and pity) do not include any form of critical assessment (such as she later realizes she should have made).  (There's also, of course, a large dollop of dramatic irony, given that Elizabeth's "opinion of everybody" is about to get a thorough upsetting.)

This is prose which begs for close attention to fine meanings, and also invites our own judgement of what is transpiring -- and the standards for judgement which are held out by the narrator are moral ones.

In contrast a modern day writer setting a novel in the Regency period is almost certainly doing so not because that is the best way to address current concerns critically -- the relations between men and women, particularly, and the forms which society imposes on them, have changed radically since then.  We place fiction in the past because it is one of the few "safe" places left which are exotic. To visit the Regency is to take a vacation from the concerns of everyday life.

If Jane Austen were to be writing today, she would be writing contemporary fiction, because her sort of fiction engages with contemporary issues.  Vice-versa, if someone is inclined to place their action two centuries in the past, it may not be with an intent to avoid critical engagement with human nature entirely -- it may not be just to produce froth -- but it will not be with the same sort of engagement as is required to drive a truly Austenish novel.  In addition, it's hard to imagine any serious author today with the values of an Augustan Tory providing the operative canon for judgement.

I actually think that Kowal's book is good -- although from an Austen point of view it drops into melodrama in the latter part of the book. (In addition, I think her characters are a little too flawed for Austen:many of Austen's characters are basically good but with a single character making them ridiculous (Sir William Lucas' vanity, for example, does not make him an unsympathetic man, just a tedious one)).  I look forward to reading the novel's successors -- but I'm not doing it for their Austenish qualities, but for their own virtues

[1]Note that Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norrell is not in this category.  Clarke is certainly not imitating Austen -- her style is more Victorian -- and it doesn't seem to be homage to any particular author.
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"The past is a foreign country; they do things differently there"

Since readers can please themselves - de gustibus, and all that -- there's no immutable law that says that you have to recognize this. But it is true that if you can't put aside your own current views you will be cutting yourself off from most of the past.

Jane Austen valorized an absence of agency in women (Mansfield Park is the high point of this). Charlotte Bronte had a serious anti-Catholic prejudice. The assumptions underlying Tom Jones are irretrievably sexist. Sayers, Chesterton, Heyer and Eliot all incorporate ant-semitic caricatures in their fiction. Almost all of Shakespeare, Jonson, Pope, Austen, Trollope, and Heyer assume that the higher your birth the better a person you are likely to be (not will necessarily be, but are likely to be).  As for any classical author, the list will be by definition very long indeed.

It can also be worth remembering that in terms of material culture no culture prior to the Twentieth Century was better than a very poor developing country of the late Twentieth Century, and in some ways was almost certainly always worse (notably in medicine and public health).  There were no antibiotics, no modern detergents or synthetic fabrics, and few paved roads (and those were surfaces for horse dander).  Hygeine was low by modern standards until the germ theory of disease started to percolate through the populace (and through advertising) in the early 20th century.  Food was expensive: for most of the population of England for most of its history the cost of food was vastly greater than the cost of lodgings.

The historical novel begins with Scott, and we've now had nearly two centuries of them. (Waverley was published in 1814.) So it's remarkable how few genuinely great examples there are of historical novels/novelists (not quite the same thing: it's arguable that Heyer was a great historical novelist but rather harder to argue for any one of her novels as being great).  There's Scott himself, and Tolstoy, and Dunnett, and Eco, for Il Nomme Della Rosa, and maybe Fraser and Heyer based on their entire corpuses. Iain Pears and Hilary Mantel, perhaps, but they're still pretty recent. (Stendahl is out: La Chartreuse de Parme reflects a period he lived through; ditto for Balzac and La Comedie Humaine.)

It's interesting to note, however, the number of historical novels on the top ten bestseller lists of the past which haven't had much staying power. Sabatini, Douglas, Asch, Shellabarger, Goudge, Costain, Waltari ... It's also noticeable that some historical novels which have remained in print -- notably Doyle's The White Company, Mitchell's Gone With the Wind, and I can remember having a copy of Bulwer-Lytton's The Last Days Of Pompeii in my school library -- aren't exactly well thought of critically.

Let's face it, it's difficult to write a genuinely good historical novel.  You have to do a ton of research to avoid just making elementary bloopers, and a ton more to really be able to provide a feel of the period.  You then have to write a genuinely good novel, which is difficult in itself.  And finally, if the novel isn't just going to be a costume drama but have structural integrity, there has to be a good reason for it to occur in the past rather than the present.

Some people want historical novels because they give a candy-coated view of the past -- they strip out the hard edges of differentness which are in actual authors from the period and replace them with characters who have modern motivations and attitudes who are therefore more acceptable to the reader.  I note in particular Jack Whyte and Ellis Peters here.  These novels pretend to be "historical" and may reflect physical events that really took place, but they are just as much fantasy as The Lord of the Rings.
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 There has been discussion (notably at tor.com) regarding the relationship between mainstream novels (referred to misleadingly as "litfic", but I'll come to that) and Science Fiction.  Aside from revealing the deep insecurity that many commenters have regarding the relative status of the two fields, I've noticed several things that seem to be, well, just wrong.

First, there's a sense that novels that are more serious and less funny/optimistic are more likely to be literary (the deck was stacked in that the article triggering the discussion was on dystopias).  Look, the "Great Tradition" of the novel begins with comedy -- Pamela, Tom Jones -- and continues through Jane Austen.  Even Ulysses is a fundamentally comic work.
 
Secondly, using the dystopia as the model for "genre in the mainstream" is not in fact typical.  My guess would be that there's far more crossover into the mainstream in works which could be broadly described as "Magic Realism".  In fact, I'd class the dystopias of Huxley and Orwell (and Zamyatin) with other works of the mid-century making sharp critiques of the emerging industrial society (such as Modern Times), and not with SF/F at all, which is a different reaction to the same set of stimuli.  Some SF picks up on the dystopian themes (cf. Camp Concentration) but that's as much SF crossing lines into the dystopian genre as the reverse.
 
Thirdly, what gets tagged as literary fiction is not a genre as such: it's fiction which tends to have a higher degree of attention paid to language and construction.  And there, there is a very grey area, since there are plenty of books which hover near the area but are not (yet) clearly in or out: it really takes about 50 years to start to separate out flashes in the pan from the real gold.  Thus, the Dance to the Music of Time is almost certainly in, as are The Lord of the Rings (regardless of the disdain of a persistent type of "literary" reader) and The Horse's Mouth, but it may be a little early to tell for Possession and some of David Lodge's or Robertson Davies' work.  Wodehouse has long since made it in as a craftsman (some of his novels, like Laughing Gas, arguably cross boundaries into SF/F). (Note that the above are all comic writers/works.)
 
Within clear SF/F, I think that there are strong candidates for whatever becomes the equivalent of a late 20th century / early 21st century set of literary "standards": Little, Big is obvious, as is Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norrell, and Stephenson seems to be knocking on the door for what Frye called "Menippean satires" (although he meant something rather different than what Menippus produced). Newer authors like Valente and Mieville make a strong showing on stylistic grounds

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